xtoph's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ep01: Natural Behavior]

Decent

It really wasn't bad for your first submission, but I didn't like it much. The music is too loud, the voices are too bland, and some of the animation is a little weird (like the ceiling fan). It doesn't have much of a storyline to it either, but you said you were just testing for feedback so I'll assume all you want reviewed is the technical quality of it. It's not so good, but I think your work will be improving quickly. Keep at 'er!

[Atari]

Rock!

I couldn't hold in a chuckle, though thinking I was supposed to be angry and offended, with the one-up sound effect. That was great. You're gonna get in shit for it.

[what woman wants]

Nice Try

I get it, but it isn't funny. It's just sort of disjointed, and the concept is way too easy. The two points I gave it for humor are for the way that the woman hits the bicycle-man in the face with her breasts, and I'm pretty sure you didn't even mean for it to look that way.

[Resteraunt Taunt]

I Smoke!

I like the part where he's like, "gimme some steak!" Because it's so true, man, steak is really good. I don't like any other parts. I don't fear that the next time I light one up some freako is gonna hurl knives at me. It's very innefective as a public service announcement.